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Wow, this game is absolutely beautiful! Love the artwork for everything from the player to the environment to the intro scene its all very well done and cohesive. You're did a great job of creating a kind of ethereal vibe with the music and art combo and it really helped me feel like I was in the mysterious world that may or may not be ending along with the character I was controlling. I loved the intro cutscene and the opening dialogue from the NPC was really nicely written and though provoking without being pretentious. I think you nailed the aesthetic on this game. My criticisms are more on the gameplay side of things. I think forcing the player to craft potions in order to clear obstacles in a platformer is not the best design decision because it constantly breaks up the action. Platformers are at their best when you get in the zone of moving around the map and get a flow going. The potion system forces you out of this frequently. Also, I think some coyote time would have helped a lot as some of the jumps could be quite unforgiving.  Overall, I think you've made a really beautiful and polished game that is very easy on the eyes, but could use a few gameplay tweaks to make it even better. Nice entry!!

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Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked the story

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thank you so much for your comment!