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I like this idea but that's a lot of text for a card. I think it would work better if you edited down the text to just open and closing a portal with a limited time use. 

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You would have hated the original version, which was even longer. 😅

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BTW, I added two alternative versions... A longer one (the original draft) and a shorter one (based partially on your comments).