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Wait, hold on, PastryIRL, why did you design Megumin to be Kazuma's favorite?!? ๐Ÿ˜ซ

You even offered us an opportunity to come clean with her with a choice to lie or to be honest with her about other girls only to lie to her anyway when you made Kazuma swear to her that his heart belongs to her and that he merely sleeps around only to satisfy his libido without actually loving any other of his girlfriends, which is a blatant lie since Kazuma doesn't actually sleep around carelessly since he actually builds relationships, what would be the point of "affection points" otherwise? ๐Ÿค”

What is the point of building a harem only to play favorites and not treasure each girlfriend and what is the point of giving a choice to be honest or lie only to lie anyway?!? ๐Ÿ˜ซ

Because this is what you did, you gave us a choice to make Kazuma a selfish hypocrite or a trustworthy boyfriend and then you went against our will to be honest and trustworthy when you made us lie to Megumin's face to pretend we love only her and only care about others for their bodies and therefore cancelled the choice since you made us lie either way and endangered the harem's health since Megumin is now aware of the harem however she is convinced to be the only one true girlfriend that we actually care for and thinks of other girls as our "fucktoys", which is not only unhealthy but also untrue.

Therefore I genuinely need and humbly request you to change Megumin's scene to make the choice of making Kazuma come clean about the harem to ACTUALLY come clean about the harem and not lie to Megumin to make her believe she is the only one true girlfriend and other girls are only fucktoys because things like "My heart belongs to you." (as in "to no one else"), "You're prettier than the others." (Never compare!), "I love you with all of my heart." (then there is no more heart left for others), "You'll always be my number one." (No! NO! Never play favorites if you don't want your harem to break apart as equality is vital, friendly competition is healthy but no hierarchy!), "There is nobody in the whole world I'll like more than you." (OH PLEASE!) are bullshit I would say if I chose to lie and certainly not if I chose to be honest which I did therefore I did not expect and strongly disapprove to say such hypocritical things because this makes me feel as if my choice to be honest didn't matter since I lie either way and I humbly request you to keep such bullshit for hypocritical players only and to keep it away from honest players because otherwise there is no point in offering choices to shape Kuzuma's personality in the first place if you don't actually respect these choices, do you understand?

You even made Kazuma pretend that he needs to have sex everyday which he doesn't even have fortunately because then it would become a routine and lose all meaning, so far this game has been awesome because it has been well balanced between adventures and relationships building including sexual exploration while not being the only focus which is why such a statement as "I need to have sex everyday" actually worries me because if it was true then sex would be a grindy routine losing all meaning.

I rolled back before this hypocritical scene with Megumin and I am waiting for you to change it before I play it and continue my relationship with her in a healthier way, you actually already made Kazuma say some honest things such as "I promise you this, Megumin. I really do love you. You won't ever lose me." but instead of the other hypocritical bullshit to make Megumin believe she is the only one important girlfriend and the others are disposable, you could say more honest things such as "You are not my only love." as the honest option during the choice then "You don't need to worry because it's not because you are not my only love that it means I don't genuinely love you." then you continue with your original "I promise you this, Megumin. I love you. You won't ever lose me." then when she asks "...is she pretty?", you could answer "You all are pretty otherwise I wouldn't love you, silly." then when she asks, "Am I not enough for you?" you could answer "No, you are not. Because each of you is unique et irreplaceable, no one can replace you but you can't replace anyone either." then you continue with your original "And I'm not going to lie to you about it. Because I really do love you, Megumin." then you could complete this sentence with "And I care about your feelings, the last thing I want is to hurt you so I want to be worth your trust." then you could continue with your original "Hah... You had me worried for a second.", "Huh?", "I guess that's a normal guys thing, after all." then you could continue with "As long as you love me. I don't mind if you love others too. But you better not forget to save up some of that love for me too!" then you could continue straight with your original "Done.", "You didn't even think about it.", "Didn't need to. It's always been true and always will be.", "You swear?", "I swear." then you could conclude with playing on Megumin's playful competitive spirit such as "I only need to be the best girlfriend and make you forget all about other girls, which will be an easy challenge since I am the first among the Crimson Demons after all." then your original "Thank you for being open with me, Kazuma. I know I can trust you. And I love you." which would THEN be deserved since Kazuma would THEN be honest, truthful and trustworthy then you would conclude with your original explosion teasing and done, this scene would ACTUALLY be honest and respect the choice of honest players so what do you think? ๐Ÿ™‚

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Damn, bro went all out :D

I do agree though, it kinda broke the experience for me.  Definitely needs some adjustment. It felt like cheating on my gf irl

(btw she also enjoys the game, suggested a BL option at some point)

Really well made game, that's the only thing that needs adjusting IMO

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Is your relationship with your girlfriend an open relationship?

With who would be the BL option? Who does she imagine Kazuma to be into?

I agree with your last statement because Adventurer Trainer is my favorite Ren'Py game so far since it is an actual video-game which balances adventures and actual RPG's gameplay with actual characters development and relationships building instead of being merely a porn visual novel which exists only for meaninglessly fapping as I already stated into another comment on this page and I am really hoping it continues to be that good until completion however I disapprove of Megumin and Lolisa's treatment in the last update which is why I shared my feedbacks and requested PastryIRL to improve them and I'm hoping he's listening. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I think it's cuz technically she's his canon waifu... Just so what I did and friend zone her. >.<

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Bro wrote a whole essay ๐Ÿ’€