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First of all I want to thank you for taking the time and the desire to review my game.  Unfortunately, I rarely get reviews.  

I'll try to answer your questions chronologically:

 1. The first part of the game I started to develop it sometime around July.  I had never written a single line of code before, nor had I used a 3D rendering program.  I literally had no idea what I was doing.  “Day 1“ went through a few reworks but still not what l want.  I am currently working hard on day 3 and i wish in the next two weeks to finish it. After that I think to make a massive rework of day 1 and day 2, with more scenes and more clear dialog.  

2. About  too many limb and head movements... the reason is because I want the game to be a little more interactive. In real life people talk with their hands, shake their heads, etc. I've never liked visual novels because they were too static.  I wanted to move mine a little. 

3.  Yes, you are right that english is not my native language. ;) I still can't find a translator because the game is a hobby project and I don't have the money to find an editor / translator.

With final words  I would also like to ask you to check Day 2 and give your opinion.  In my opinion it is much better than day 1, but any opinion and advice is welcome.

Thank you for your time and advices. They make my game better.

Best regards,

Milo

I did download Day 2 and will check it out soon.. Sorry if I sounded a little harsh in my comment  lol

Thank you for your hard work and please keep developing the Game.. 

Best of Luck :)