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Alright! Some may be me misreading things but here goes so far! everyone else look away from spoilers
-intro, 'purfume'
-Walking with Sinner in the woods, 'segway(tm)' instead of 'segue', either a word (probably 'hand' or 'arm') is missing in the bit where she puts it on the tree.
-Quest for In Light of the Seventh. Simmer and sinner might need swapping? Anyway for such a large amount of writing, its remarkable theres only so few typos (though getting clobbered with one right out the gate is a bit heheh)! Its all Ive found so far. Lovin the game and the weird offputting ladies therein.
Hiya, back with a few more.
Sinner's Apartment 'hans'-> 'hands'.
Lady Moonshine 'in't' accent or typo?
Eiffel Table purchase, 'slither' -> 'sliver'
Exploring Bluehills 'cities' -> 'city's'?
Still having an amazing time, good laughs as well as oof gut punches. <3
Are the game mechanics gotten into anywhere? Like what causes successes/ fails, can you improve your chances, etc? I cant see anywhere to put on my silk kimono to improve my drama!
Thankies!
Also a few more to add to the list.
edit:added three more:
Nasty Girl says Lets get 'too' it, should be 'to' when fixing the roof.
Weapon says 'slither' -> 'sliver' twice in interviewing him.
Same in Writer's apartment, coughing up a 'slither'
Lovely Lady says 'segway' again when you talk to the Pulp Writer in her apt. -> Segue
Shop, Eating cereal, 'it takes of sugar and lead' takes->tastes.
AMOD zone, concrete seems to be split into 'conc rete'.
Searching the woods for the shrine. 'for an especially interpret' -> intrepid?
Talking to Raven in shop when she preempts Nasty Girl's suggestion, Ravens and Nasty Girls missing apostrophes.
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I also found one in the scene where you are playing board games with The Weapon it says, "Do we every interact with each other in this game?"
Also I don't know if this was intentional but after writing the war story for the Pulp Writer as my last action for that day, the next days I was never prompted to give it to her (when I reloaded and didn't write the story i had the option to go apologize to her). Do you have to turn in the story the same day you write it?