"if artists try harder, their art can look better"
If a human tries harder, their grammar could be better, yet you still chose to type this garbage comment and grammar. Free speech does not mean freedom of consequences. Art is art, there's no better or worse. You prefer a different art style than what is portrayed here, but the art is by no means bad. I love this art style over the typical Japanese visual novel style. The proportions are accurate, anything past that is subjective. You clearly don't know anything about art if you can't grasp that simple concept, and clearly shouldn't be judging anyone else with such lack of knowledge. Based on your choice of words, you're clearly under the age of 18 and lack maturity. Learn to understand the difference between personal preference and bad quality. I hope someone tears down something you worked hard on as well. Perhaps someone already did if you have to make rude comments online to maintain any sort of sense of control and power in your life. You're clearly not getting enough of it in your own day-to-day, pubescent life. Grow up.
P.S: You're the only POS who didn't enjoy the art. You're alone with your false and sh*tty "criticism."