Yeah it seems to be almost random for me on whether any renpy games will work when I download them and redownloading and installing doesn't fix it. I'm not tech savvy enough to figure this out right now so hopefully someone else can help out.
OK so I just went back through to double check I was actually up to date for windows and I wasn't so now I feel like a complete idiot lol. I updated and now the game is running. Thank you for the help you tried to give me and sorry about wasting some of your time.