Weep this was so sweet so far! Which is only making me gird myself all the more for what I know you have in store for these two!! LOL
Everything from the overall vibe and aesthetic, to the art, to the music, to the presentation, and the writing felt so delightfully soft, as though purposefully meant to lure us in unwittingly 😆 The art in general is just gorgeous! The soft color palette that ties everything together really gives this a "shoujo" feel, an almost magical kind of vibe that feels quite fitting somehow to the idea of a young priestess falling in love for the first time! (If only it wouldn't go on to have such disastrous effects lskdjfas) I especially love the way you framed the CGs you've included already, really making them stand out.
I'm already in love with the dynamic between Comaetho and Melanippus. Comaetho having a much greater sense of maturity and calm but lacking of any experience in actually have had a childhood and doing things just for fun and for herself. While Melanippus on the other hand has zero idea when it comes to decorum and is just an utter sweetheart in how his emotions control him so much (from his sheer unadulterated joy at how ending up at the lake must have been a gift, to his sadness as the cow's pain). It made their conversations and interactions so delightful to read, especially seeing them both try to figure each other out (with varying success). I'll be really interested in seeing how their relationship progresses as they are both such sweethearts right now so I couldn't imagine anything bad happening to them sob... (I only wish LKDJAFSD)
Nice sense of dread coming in there towards the end with the convo with Comaetho's parents and then the expertly framed CG of Melanippus's face coming in despite everything she'd been told. A great setup for the ANGST and DRAMA that shall come erelong.
Overall just a wonderful demo that's already got me itching for more and wanting to see how this whole thing is going to come tumbling down... 😎