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This is fantastic, and very entertaining! Would you consider changing the subheading to read "...until recently it was..." or "...until it was recently..."?

Does it sound wrong/bad? I tried to keep the wording in accordance with a kind of abrupt style of notes...

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Yes, it sounds wrong - but you only need to add "it" to make it sound right! Alternatively, you could take the "was" out: "...until recently rediscovered...".


One more change: "Pleads to borrow a torch."