So far I've counted four of us in the bad-guys-in-the-dungeon camp: you guys, me, The Dark Lord Told Me..., and The Dark One.  Yours is probably the most complete, and I congratulate you for that! That said, I don't know where the line is between your work and BitD (I'm not familiar with it), so it's hard for me to assess the quality of your rules. It's apparent, however, that an awful lot of work went into this so well done.