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A jam submission

An Inexact PactView project page

Short Story for the Write 500 Jam
Submitted by Ripper53 — 9 days, 23 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Writing Quality#14.1434.143
Story Quality#33.4293.429
Overall Creativity#43.7143.714

Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Word Count
500

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Comments

HostSubmitted(+1)

Starting a story with “putrid scent” is extremely powerful imo. I really enjoyed your rich word choices. I like how bringing the demons through the castle is the maze. My favorite part is teleporting the books and dropping them to lead the demon where you want him. I got a pleasantly creepy feeling when it ended darkly!

Developer

POG. You actually caught how I implemented the maze! I was going to describe the puzzling layout of the castle but I didn't have enough words for it. Although, because your brain is massive, you went beyond mere words and understood!

HostSubmitted

I am looking forward to reading the process documents, but I haven't yet because I wanted to see what I got just from the story. Cool idea!