What a beautiful rhyme! It sounds a bit like 1800’s-style children’s stories and makes me smile.

This reminds me of a fragment of Blaise Pascal’s thoughts:
“Flies are so mighty that they win battles, paralyse our minds, eat up our bodies.”
The flies that win battles are a reference to Montaigne who tells how the inhabitants of Tamly, besieged by the Portuguese, used swarms of bees to push them out.

Nice submission! I enjoy that you took a more lighthearted tone, it's a nice break from some of the darker or more melancholy works.