The way this Twine rhymes is awesome; it feels a bit like Dr. Seuss. Felt like a children's storybook (well, until "ass" was a rhyme, anyway . . .) A very quirky story, and the Twine theme you used suits it perfectly.

(btw, I'm also in the Twiny Jam! My game is HCF. Check it out?)

Love the rhyme and beat of the passages, ordering espresso with jam ASAP

Calloo Callay, O' Frabjous day! I wrote 300 words, hooray!

Thanks for the fun Jam Porpentine