@Norbez: Thank you very much for your comment! I checked out HCF and left you a comment there.

This is a great Twine. The writing is top-notch, and though there are only hints of the world this story takes place in, there's just enough information given. Very well done! (At first, I thought it was a mother and father saying goodbye to their son going to Iraq, but I quickly found that this was more than meets the eye. . .)

(by the way, I'm also in this Twiny Jam! My game is HCF. Check it out?)