A very interesting little game. At first, I thought you were to click on the ". . ."s to put together pieces of what caused the mirror to be broken, putting the story together as the mirror was put back together. I was surprised when under each piece told a chronological part of the story. You might want to reconsider that format, as it let off a very different impression than what the actual game held. (Didn't notice until now that you could go back to the beginning after choosing a ". . ."; I was just refreshing the page the whole time. XD)
I really like your writing. It's very well done; I especially like how you called the mirror "a cracked daisy". What an awesome metaphor! :D And those lines: "From some things. There is no way back. From some news, no way forward." Wow!
(by the way, I'm also in the Twiny Jam! My game is HCF. Check it out?)
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