Always love to see Twine games! This is another good reminder that I should get back to finishing something on Twine, it's so fun to work with. I enjoyed playing through this and think you did a great job with the accompanying atmosphere. Nice work.

This has been, so far, the most interesting game I've played - I really enjoyed the narrative focus and the different celestial characters available to chat with. You really have a talent for writing, and the ambient audio track complemented the tone of the story as well!

Nice writing, surprising that you managed to do so much in such a little time :)

I got some feedback: the audio can get a little gratting after some time playing, and the white text can be hard to read when it appears over the white patches of the background.

Besides that, it plays quite well. Keep at it!

so so cool!! really good writing :)