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A jam submission

A Pick-Me-Up-Story: A small pick-up-dateView game page

Every little thing tells a story, so long as you stop to read it.
Submitted by Toaster Strooder — 11 days, 1 hour before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Most "Complete" Project#72.8002.800
Most Innovative Use of Ludonarrative#72.6002.600
Overall#82.4002.400
Most Compelling Character#92.0002.000
Most Compelling Narrative#92.2002.200

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

A simple but interesting concept. I know it is hard to implement even basic stuff sometimes, like the text input. This is a programmer's game. Not many graphics, but rather an experimental take on text based games. I see that you played a lot with this concept and that you got better the more you play with.

Developer

Oh yeah, this game is partially the result of lots of time developing a number of text based games. I wanted to see how far I could push text based interactivity, albeit without changing the original game too much.

Submitted(+1)

This is such a charming idea! I enjoy the vibe of piecing together a story from remnants of things once past, kind of like from an anthropologist perspective.

Developer(+1)

I hadn't even considered this from the perspective of an anthropologist! That's a cool way to think about it! Thank you for the kind words.

Submitted(+1)

Great to see this revisited. It's my favourite of your games, and I think every change made it better. More stuff like this please!

Developer

Thank you for the kind words!