Ah, I just missed the voting window! Dammit!

Still, I can confidently say, I really dislike this kind of navel-gazing, meandering pseudo-philosophy. I mean, I guess it comes with the territory of trying to write semi-seriously about abstract, spectral entities, but still... not my cup of tea.

That said, the prose is very competent. My Russian is only intermediate level, so I can't really judge properly, but from the bits I read, the dialogue sounds very natural and believable. The English translation is obviously scuffed, badly scuffed — typos, mixing up similar sounding words, inconsistent tense — but it manages to get the meaning and atmosphere across well enough.

And the framing device of having the characters be described as if they're being observed from outside their windows is very creepy and effective. I really like that part, though I'm not sure how it ties into the central themes, if at all.

Overall, very solid showing! I may not like it personally, but you're clearly a fine writer!

That was so peculiar I don't even know how to feel haha. Very interesting, but I would have preferred it to be a little more explained about what is actually happening.

I don't know what I just read but that's my kind of jam. Didn't really mind the explicit content, you can find much more disgusting stuff by reading a newspaper.

The game definitely nails the eerie feel. The mechanical-sounding English lines actually add to the atmosphere, as if even the narrator doesn't grasp what the fuck is going on.

I don't know if we are supposed to guess a story from this. My literal read was angel-xenomorph-hybrid infects a family and maybe the government is involved.

I did notice a minor mistake, in the scenes with the child drawings, some of the lines are in Russian even if you choose English on the preferences menu.

After playing this and some of Ice Pick Lodge's stuff, I gotta say Russians should ditch invading in favor of making more weird horror media.

It was a mysterious experience. The implememtation was a bit unsuccessful, imho. Personally, I would have liked more details about the game world and characters, because I am not a big fan of abstract plots . The music and soundtrack are sick. 

Also, explicit content seems kinda edgy, ngl.

Avoiding typos and correct punctuation are important. Especially when a game is majorly made out of text, without too much art or gameplay to back the story up.

I don't mind if the story takes time to build up, but it has to be correct at least. There are a few places where I think the writer means something else (ex: visible > one cannot see things), and the text does not make perfect sense in English. The "guessing" part is extremely difficult due to losing context in translation.

Lastly, trying to please people with explicit content in a game is very tricky. Dedicated explicit game enjoyers have high standards for them, even surpassing SFW video games. So be very, very careful when you play this card.