I really loved the art at the end with the field of sunflowers :) Overall just a great story, I love that you fleshed out the script so fully with the time given!

Love the Old West theme. It's a fun, exciting story with lovable characters and lots of good twists and turns. The character art is totally gorgeous. But that made it conspicuous that there isn't art of the supporting characters--it might be worth seeing if the story can be reorganized so you don't interact directly with the people who don't have art. Not having art of the protagonist also made me feel sort of like I wasn't really "in" the story. But it's a great yarn!