I really loved the creepy atmosphere you created in this story. The deserted school after dark is the perfect setting!
The characters were designed really well and the writing was great!
Great job and thanks!
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Accessibility | #12 | 4.571 | 4.571 |
Sound Effects | #20 | 4.357 | 4.357 |
User Interface Design | #24 | 4.571 | 4.571 |
Log Line | #24 | 4.429 | 4.429 |
Character Designs | #27 | 4.786 | 4.786 |
Overall | #43 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Music | #43 | 4.286 | 4.286 |
Voice Acting | #58 | 2.643 | 2.643 |
Story | #58 | 4.429 | 4.429 |
Game Graphic & Logo Design | #59 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Game Page Design | #63 | 4.214 | 4.214 |
Halloween Themed | #74 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
I really loved the creepy atmosphere you created in this story. The deserted school after dark is the perfect setting!
The characters were designed really well and the writing was great!
Great job and thanks!
This was a fun and creepy little story that reminds me of playground/school rumors! Love the character designs here, your artist has a very good grasp of form and anatomy, and I loved the varied poses with your characters.
Thanks for making this!
Great eerie game of how telling tales can come back to haunt you! Really enjoyed the creepy atmosphere and the art, music and character design were all on point! The writing was smooth and felt natural and I loved the ending. Amazing work everybody!
I knew what I was getting in too as soon as I saw the screenshots. And it did *not* dissapoint!
The art is of superb quality, felt like truly watching one of those horror animes. As for the story, that was a *great* twist at the end, avoiding getting into detail to avoid spoiling lol But really liked it, it lures you into a sense of knowing what will happen... until it doesn't ;)
Very well ambientated with the music, and nice way to get around with the backgrounds too!!
Overall a great horror novel!!!
Since I posted a positive on the front of the page ill put my critiques here!
-Overall, I would have loved to see the characters right from the beginning, I feel like it would have been more visually engaging right from the start.
-The music and the audio were very well used, the sound effects were fun and added to the experience.
-The bg I feel are the ones that needed more work, even if they were drawn over, I think would have given a more unique feeling to the game, I know due to time constraints sometimes is difficult.
Overall, a very good experience!
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