Very nice! Good atmospheric descriptions.

Ooh yeah. Super atmospheric, poetic descriptions, and gets you right in there.

This was a nice journey to the bottom of the sea. Simple and clean writing with interesting context. The songs had fairly limited lyrics so the fact that you were inspired to write a story with some form of a start and finish is admirable. The descriptions of the damage to the cable was really intense.

I enjoyed this. Nice Job!

The writing in this was wonderfully oppressive.

I loved the vibe of the whole thing, and I saw a few places that the narrative probably diverged. The world wasn't over-explained but gave more than enough to latch onto. The creeping ecological issues, the work in a dangerous pirate situation, the separation between the two characters -- all really worked for me.

The choices didn't seem all that meaningful - putting the letter in the pocket? It felt like an important thing at the time, but ultimately just felt like an interesting roleplay moment.