Boo! Elves! ;p Seriously though, I like the idea of a different faction offering a favor for a favor. Letting themselves be seen just enough so that the ones they're dealing with know they had a hand in it was pretty bad ass.

That was brilliant. The twist at the end had me guessing right up until the reveal. Well done!

excellent description of the tech,  high stake story, set up for a long journey to come
i really like this

Great stuff-- it feels like a really original take on the theme with a fun little bit of High Elvish trickery at the end.

You did great with establishing the technology and using it to establish takes without getting bogged down in it.

You've managed to honour the source material while at the same time putting a unique twist on the alien psi-technology of the High Elves - an excellent piece of work!

You displayed an insane ability to translate high-techworks into descriptions that actually give you the proper vibes for the equipment the characters are working with. Also, love the representation with Yrchale using they/them pronouns, gonna share this one with my partner!