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Mud & Blood - OPR Writing Jam #10 Story's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Concepts & Originality | #14 | 3.966 | 3.966 |
Overall | #14 | 3.770 | 3.770 |
Flow & Clarity | #15 | 3.759 | 3.759 |
Adherence to Theme | #19 | 3.586 | 3.586 |
Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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What a turn! Love the cheery tone, reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett. Minor things could be fixed with a bit another proof reading pass, but I loved the dialogue and the names (Biggun, Larjun). Great job!
What a turn! Love the cheery tone, reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett. Minor things could be fixed with a bit another proof reading pass, but I loved the dialogue and the names (Biggun, Larjun). Great job!
not many people write about ogres much less make them the protagonist. I really enjoyed the vibe of the story. you really got the feel of ogres down.
Exceptionally creative, with tremendous character. Awesome job! I'm not usually a fan of ogres, but I think I'm beginning to appreciate the Gut Gang. :D
This was great. The humor especially, Biggun having a relative named Larjun is perfect. Great work!
Really good story. Though now I'm wondering if the hogodile they ate might've been an orc that didn't take off the costume fast enough lol
This was rather enjoyable to read, gave me Hitchhikers guide vibes and personally I think that fits amazingly well with what's being told here.
Cute story. Having it told as a narration provided some good opportunities for humour, but I'm left wanting to know who it is narrating it!
One of the more humorous stories so far.
I know it wouldn’t be smart to steal one from the orcs, as the Guy Gang Ogres found out… but now I want to try a hogodile.