Hi Mengqi,

Interesting take on the prompt—I like how you convey the narrator's confusion and disorientation. You do a great job of very quickly establishing an atmosphere. I wanted a stronger sense of where this game might go, and of what this might be a prototype for.

Hope you're well!

I like the use of language having a double meaning. There's a bit too much text though.

character is having lots of intense emotions... very intense world... hope you're taking care

 一个人,两个state,光天化日下.妙啊.