One small detail I really loved: Ao says the "dogs" of Venkalth are coming, and then when they appear they're a bunch of floating hairy eyeballs. I don't know if there's a term for this, but I really love it in fantasy stories when characters use mundane terms to refer to fantastical things. I find it way more compelling than making up a new name, or using recognisable fantasy monsters. The word "dog" suddenly takes on a strange new meaning, and the image of the eyeball also takes on a strange new meaning, as my mind is trying to connect the two things.
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Most Compelling Narrative | #1 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
| Best Use of the (optional) Theme | #1 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
| Most Innovative Narrative | #3 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Most Compelling Character | #3 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Best Use of Ludic Elements (Game Mechanics) To Deliver Story | #3 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #3 | 3.700 | 3.700 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Ayy. I'm glad you like it. It's easier on me as well. Because of the length of the project it's not possible for me to really think of a lot of meaningful names, especially since the plot is a somewhat iterative process of me accessing how much work I could do with the time left. There also wasn't enough time for the player to start getting used to / associate names with a particular meaning. So I kept the list of names minimal (Vekalth for instance was $mountain_god internally).
This is a solid little platformer that does a good job of making its gameplay and story feel related! Having the mysterious elements occur while you're running from place to place doing your errands was a smart move to make said mystery that much more mysterious. I also like how those journeys between events give you time to think about what's going on. It's simple, and there's admittedly still a teeny bit of a disconnect, but it's effective and still works overall! It also helped me feel like I was getting better at playing it as I continued to ponder the mystery at hand. :P
I enjoy the pixel art in this one, as well. You make some pretty good color choices here, and those particle effects paid off, even if they could be a little distracting at times.
I have but one small nitpick: at the initial murder scene, I feel like the effect would have been helped if the blood was actually visible. At the perspective and scale, this might have been a little difficult to pull off, but having some of the ground around the body being colored red - or maybe even some red on the body - would have done wonders for the moment.
As it stands though, you did a bang up job!
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Interrogation_Program.runThanks for the detailed response.
I agree with your assessment here. The lack of blood was laziness in my part, but then again I finished the game without time to spare (due to unexpected change of plans). I initially wanted to build a second scene where there are visible blood instead. Telling the player outright that the blood leads to the right was neither natural nor subtle
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