• Interesting premise!
• I would have liked to see a difference between the physical appearance of the character and their online persona. Was a bit confused whether they are fighting online or irl?
• I liked the list of moves. They were very defined. As well as the body modifications.
• GM section lost me a bit. I wasn't too sure how the heroes / villains fit in with the bullying?

Overall, I like this one! You did a great job. If I had one last suggestion for a future edit, maybe move your setting inside a virtual world.

I find it hilarious that you put the "enjoy the game" notes in the GM only section. Players don't get to have fun!