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A jam submission

Outlaws - Cyber Noir Tabletop RPGView project page

A tabletop RPG featuring teleportation booths that are not so fail-proof.
Submitted by Phoenix Fireflower — 5 hours, 16 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall Appearance#54.0004.000
Overall#153.2923.292
Quality of Writing#163.3333.333
Use of Theme#263.2503.250
Mechanics#292.5832.583

Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

While reading I had a few thoughts:

  • HOLY JEEZ the pixel art is pretty! Most of the text beyond the first page needed a well background to really be legible. And on the flip side, the tables take away from your art.
  • You set tone incredibly well with the intro.

Overall, I just wish there was more because I want to play around in this world! Nice job!

Submitted

I like the background concept: obviously I was immediately reminded of Altered Carbon and "double sleeving" but this is its own thing.

The pixel art is gorgeous but pasting the tables in without formatting them was a bad idea.  

Speaking of tables, some more random encounters/events (or just anything more on the GM side than general pointers) would have rounded this off nicely. I think you've done well, and I commend you for completing the job. I failed in that task, so you have my eternal envy.

Oh: you also used d12s, of which I am a great fan!