Windows version just opens an error dialog that says "Failed to load mono". I think you should add MonoBleedingEdge directory to the archive. Linux version worked fine. 

Story works perfectly. The mechanic that makes you read it all over again is kind of annoying. 

Awesome story and awesome mood! It was really annoying to click through dialogues every time I fail and as a result I've played the game through about 10 times. But I did get to the end because of the thrilling story, couldn't leave it like that without finding out the ending. That is really impressive! Art was pleasant. Even though some creepy music is lacking for the perfect mood, you still get a five because of story and the idea. It's definitely worth publishing, but I would suggest to rethink the gameplay and make it more forgiving, otherwise it kills the thrill of the story. I really enjoyed it, thanks a lot!