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A jam submission

Arisword-ChroniclesView game page

A small RTP game based on Panodin and Lucinita's sidestory.
Submitted by CreativaGS — 121 days, 19 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#22.0002.000
Fun#21.5001.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • The game's biggest weakness is lack of direction. The game needs more little touches to direct you on the path forward. You could have two or three subtle hints to go to the bar at night. You could also note the bar is open at night at the door or the shop opens in the morning. Also let players rest until nighttime to make day and night more feasible. I also noticed that some maps are cut and paste- the first bar has people but the second bar has no customers or the choice to buy a drink. Also, there were some glitches with map transitions (I see another map, then I am back in the world map) and I even crashed in the first town randomly. The story starts off strong with the plot of saving your beloved that also aligns with the sickness of another to create opportunity for the main hero. Keep working on the small details like making sure the doors open or you capture the little touches like plot progression to even out the game flow. Keep working on it and you can have a small and enjoyable experience.
  • I couldn't figure out where to go after the bar. It was a little too vague on where to go. My suggestions are try to explain where to go better. I like the day and night system but it was hard to progress. I do see potential and I do hope you continue to work on this. I really liked the opening of the game. However I think there could be more added to the opening. For example I want to see them fight the dragon first or have the player fight it as the tutorial battle.

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Comments

Host

Your game got 2nd place. If you're on Discord my Discord is Rose Guardian #3617   Please let me know what character you want lineart drawn of.

Developer

Thank you, for some weird reason Discord don't find your user :D
Anyway I would like to see how do you think Lizbeth will look alike!
Thank you.

It's great!

Developer

Thank you.