I was hoping the chamber pot description would raise a smile. I can't claim any great skill in poetry, but I found it fun to try to create a game in rhyme.

My favorite part is the description of the chamber pot. :)

Thanks for the encouragement. There was definitely much more to the story to explore.

Hee, a room escape game in Twine, and in verse, no less. And somehow it manages to not be trivial, despite the small size. I think you're onto something here. The concept may be worth revisiting.