I'll be honest. While I generally enjoy storytelling, I've been sliding between jam games so I can only give each one a set time.

Nonetheless, I read the entire dream ritual and the "pro-sounding" writing is definitely there. I usually laugh at myself for jotting down with a thesaurus at hand, but when the vivid image of the ritual participants appeared unconsciously in my head I knew I was reading something good.

Keep up the good work!

Solid narrative that fits the theme of the jam. would have liked there to be some kind of additional interaction and engagement besides the story branches, but time constraints will make you pick and choose what matters most. Glad to see you managed to put together a full experience.

Really phenomenal writing, job well done on that. I hope you continue to work on this and add a  visual component because the story itself was very compelling. Good job :)

hi! played and rated your game. will be cool if you also play mine! thank you! https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-13/rate/3343730