I'll be honest. While I generally enjoy storytelling, I've been sliding between jam games so I can only give each one a set time.
Nonetheless, I read the entire dream ritual and the "pro-sounding" writing is definitely there. I usually laugh at myself for jotting down with a thesaurus at hand, but when the vivid image of the ritual participants appeared unconsciously in my head I knew I was reading something good.
Keep up the good work!