Being just a preview, I can't give my full thoughts, though I like what is laid out so far. The prompts are very extensive, which is great for letting you really flesh out your entries. I hope that in the full version, the Houses and Rivals are featured more prominently in the prompts. Maybe some sort of other draws to establish you character beyond just their House, or to give a Friend relationship to balance the rival. There are just a lot of ways this preview could go and it makes me excited for what the full game will bring. This isn't even mentioning the excellent flavor illustrations which really cinch the feel. Good job so far, and congrats on funding so fast!