Pros:

• Good art assets and UI, though the wolf art design is inconsistent.

Areas of Growth:

• The intro goes on far too long and doesn't have much of a purpose...feels kind of "navel-gazey". You could easily shorten it and still achieve the same effect.
  • He also talks about how he both love and hates nature in a contradictory sense...kind of confusing to me. 
• I don't really get a good sense of the main character and I'm not sure that his internal monologuing can carry the narrative. I don't really get a reason to care about him / I don't find him interesting.
• Tense is also not super consistent...the MC does back and forth between past and present. 
• There's a lot of "telling" where there should be more "showing" ("my body alerts me to nearby danger")
• The love interest comes across as VERY predatory if you don't go along with what he wants
• There's some translation issues (closet instead of refrigerator)