Some errors were encountered: pronouns displayed as "$pronouns" instead of what I typed, and also, I played deep into the game and encountered at least one page with the default Twine passage text, i.e., "double click to edit", on it. Fixes suggested. Alternative suggestion: just fix it. Prognosis: has potential, but needs work.
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