I couldn't stand any of the characters, the writing and the pacing. The MC was utterly annoying and a smart-ass. Someone I would probably avoid irl. The 'love interests' weren't intriguing much either. Too try-hard. There were a lot of grammatical mistakes and misspellings, and the pacing was all over the place.
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