Love the story, the world building and characters.

Only issue I have with this is that there is way too much description of... well what everything looks like. There is no way to imagine all of that in your head, and at some point I just decide to skip reading it, because it takes too long to get back to the characters.

Another thing, which I guess is minor, but there aren't really individual routes. Every route has the same events happen. Which I was expecting, 4 individual routes for one writer would be a lot, but it makes it a bit of a pain, having to read through everything and trying not to skip new dialogue when going for another person.