This a fine start.

The writing has a few mistakes which can be solved with basic editing, but I wouldn't say they worsen the experience. What does is the introductory conversation between the dragon and the wolf, which comes off as a lighter maid-and-butler dialogue.

Maybe it's too early to call this out, but having shirtless dudes and a naked man in the beginning like that kinda makes the adult content feel gratuitous. Also in regards to art, I also feel like the expressions, though of quality, are too exaggerated for the actions on screen.

Overall, I think this project has decent potential, even if it is a little tropey and gratuitous.