I would actually write this visual novel a 2.7. I thought it was very clever on how the use of a visual novel within a visual novel. A good Nuance to visual novels. The voice acting was very well done and great performance on The Voice Actors. The Aesthetics of the game is also of a professional quality. The problem with this story is it definitely drags. The dialogue in and of itself is a little bit too long-winded. A lot of times it felt like real life instead of a slice of Life genre. whatever the twist was supposed to be the story was not worth still dragging on about it. I think as well the reason being is that the plot is also pretty slow in of itself. I would say the overall story was not interesting. Also there was a lot of redundancy in character design. And sometimes there were gimmicks that were way over used as well.
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