The art is jarring, the text is all but illegible and the main character names are really bad.
It would be better if we never got to see what the main character looks like as the current character is very bad. Why is he yellow? Why are the only available names Dax and Melanie?
The font is really hard to read and I was straining my eyes to even understand what the characters were saying. The overall dialogue isn't any better and sounds like someone pretending to be human.
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