Really messy (almost) kinetic novel. There's lots of repetitive text (like Steadfast talking about Finn's smile). Later on in the game, a whole section is shown 2-3 times. The meta element with the narrator and the discussion of storytelling come out of nowhere and basically adds nothing except a copout to not settle on an ending. The story is really basic, pretty much as simple as you can make this kind of thing. There's also some weird popin glitches with the character portraits. There's not much appeal here but there is a lot of jank, not good.
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