Too much reading, not enough interactions, thus story gets boring real quick before intrigue sets in. Less (reading) is more (intriguing), but unfortunately creator opted the other way round. Long winded stories without a visual or 2 (that can often repeat themselves) do not stimulate the curious mind.
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