love the sound effects incorporated into scenes. THE BACKGROUNDS!!! chef's kiss. the interactive components (including movement) are so cool, with how they add to the eerie vibe. THE SORTING MINIGAME was so cool, even though i didn't realize how it worked initially. The way how Ash is written-- he's so charming! like his dry humor made me laugh out loud while playing. I am loving the mystery behind the town so far and can't wait to see how the MC is involved. Keep up the good work Pepsica!!1!!1!!

options menus needs adjustment: labels in white are almost unreadable against the pale background.

few spelling errors, but don't affect overall understanding of story.