I do not enjoy cuckolding.

In particular, this is about the off-screen sex scene with Natasha in the village. Why the hell is the player locked out of a scene that includes the player character? After an extremely long stretch of nothing but dialogue, that would have veen the perfect place to put a scene. And instead you decide to show the player the middle finger. Well, here's mine in return.

Now, I could tell you at least a dozen ways in which that cheap joke harms your game. I could explain principles of player immersion, pacing rythms, narrative reliability, meta-communication, emotional connection, and player trust, and how those are even more important in an AVN. Every single lession would make you better writers. But I don't think you deserve me making that effort, or that your goal is to write a good AVN to begin with. In fact, I'm getting the impression Tobias is your self-insert. So, good luck with your game. Or not. I don't care, I'm outta here.