Not really my type of story, but it's clear a lot of work went into it - lots of cute sprites and CGs.
I really liked the art and music in the Goldmane sections particularly, and the BGs overall were well made. I think the choices took away from my ability to connect to the characters, and the story you wanted to tell.
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