Played the browser version.

Short, sweet. Beautiful art - I like the BG's and the sprites. Miri's CG at the climax was nice. The plot is very well structured. You have a simple and direct way of writing, which suits Becky's character, but at times made the story feel flat. You might study some poems to build your skill with prose.

I liked the world-building when it was in the background, and I liked watching Becky lie to herself about pragmatism while falling for Miri - I wish there had been more time devoted to them falling in love.