The game text has a really clunky speed and way of working, it's very annoying. The text could be improved, it's too much text and boring... You need better pacing and to show more instead of speaking. I have no idea what her relationship with the others was like because she keeps hinting at everything without really saying anything. It was probably meant to be mysterious but it's just lacking to explain anything properly. The art might be artistic, but it's hard to understand what it is. This game needs a major improvement... But the premise has potential. The tags are good, just needs to be worked more on.