A bit messy + inconsistent on the finer details for much of the story... why the fixation on the razor when they've already given each other injections? With the way the character was introduced, I was expecting more self-loathing to come before the selfcest? Still, it was clear you had a distinct landing point you wanted to finish on, and you absolutely got there by the end. As for the language, I didn't find all the drinking sequences particularly compelling, but the foreshadowing when the MC talks about supermarket packaging was a standout line for me. Would have loved to dig deeper into the subtle differences between the two characters. Thank you for the game !!