Mixed impression from this one (version 0.5).
The story is not bad and the sequence of events also makes sense. The music is fitting and the whole style is quite unique. I think it has potential and is quite unique compared to other AVNs.
The writing is less nice. I can't quite put a finger on what exactly, but something is off. It is not as engaging as I would have expected it to be, jokes weren't too funny and very often scenes end abruptly with "The next morning" instead of some more graceful transition (like basic goodbye at least) .
The visuals are not bad, but facial expressions could use a lot of work and I wish there was more of them during conversations. In some cases the expressions looked really off. And I'd remove all animations and replaced them with a couple of static renders. Animations are not a requirement and they were really not great here.
Overall for me the game is ~3.5/5 rounded up to 4. It is not too bad, but I'm not sure I'll be following its development in the future.
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