The art and story is cool but the dialogue feels so AI it's hard to unsee it once you have. If you really want to use AI for it then do so but re-write it again afterwards to make it human, it would take you little time each update and go a long way towards improving the feel.
Playing through the chap2p2 now and man they speak to each other like robots.
Cold. Soulless. Like they'd never heard a human speak.
Always the speech comes in three. I don't know how you haven't spotted it. It drives me nuts.
The translator. It doesn't understand function words. It doesn't understand context.
Like a machine chewing through grammar and leaving nothing behind. It says things. Things that sound meaningful so long as you don't think.
Think man, think! You are not a machine, with a machine mind and machine heart, you are a man!
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